haiku 7th February

8 02 2007

Out of the tunnel

Concrete, factories, sidings.

The train reaches home.

*

Arms around shoulders

Warm of breath, soothing fingers

My husband’s hugs heal.

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9 02 2007
Queen Minx

Sorry honey, I didn’t do the haiku bit … skipped class and went messing around with beer and boys instead, so I don’t know how they are supposed to go.

It’s cute though. How’s that for literary critique!?? wink!

xx

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